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Immensus

by VINCENT PIANA

Two gifted teens, Brian and Electra, are drawn into the orbit of a powerful space corporation-turned-empire, where their unique talents and bond make them targets of a secretive organization determined to maintain control. As they navigate conspiracies, moral dilemmas, and high-stakes threats, the story explores the cost of defying entrenched power and the courage required to dream beyond imposed limits.

Reader Review Summary

Set in a near-future world dominated by a powerful space corporation-turned-empire, the story follows two gifted teenagers, Brian and Electra, as they become entangled in a high-stakes conspiracy. Brian, a space-obsessed teen, and Electra, a fiercely independent natural leader, are drawn together by a mutual recognition of each other's potential. Alongside Killian Wells, the visionary CEO of Immensus—a company with advanced space mining technology and a private school for gifted youth—the teens confront a secretive organization intent on maintaining its grip on power. The narrative explores themes of ambition, resilience, and the moral complexities of private enterprise in space, with action, mystery, and philosophical questions woven throughout. The book is positioned as a YA sci-fi thriller, with comparisons to works like Ender’s Game and Interstellar, and is the first in a planned series.

Readers praised the book for its fast-paced, suspenseful plot and accessible writing style. Many found the story hard to put down, citing relentless tension, unexpected twists, and a blend of mystery and action. The characters, particularly Brian and Electra, were described as richly developed, with emotional depth and relatable struggles such as grief and determination. The science and technology elements were noted as being well-explained and not overwhelming, making the book approachable for younger readers. Several reviewers highlighted the book’s exploration of moral questions and its reflection of contemporary issues around power and governance. The book was also commended for its appeal to both teens and adults, with some teachers recommending it to students and young readers appreciating the relatable protagonists and the accessible, straightforward prose.

Some readers expressed dissatisfaction with the writing style, describing it as overly simple or immature for the intended YA audience. One reviewer criticized the character development, particularly for Brian and Electra, finding their behavior and dialogue unrealistic for their age and likening Electra to a robotic figure. The pacing was noted as uneven by a few readers, with a slow start and some middle chapters described as plodding or boring before the story picked up in the final third. There were also complaints about info-dumping and a lack of maturity in the characters, with one reader suggesting the book might be better suited for younger or less mature readers. The cover design received mixed feedback, and some felt the book’s length contributed to pacing issues.

The book has received a generally positive response, with an average reader rating of 4.65 out of 5 from 17 ratings and 12 full reviews. It was recognized as a Red Ribbon Winner by The Wishing Shelf Book Awards, where young readers particularly enjoyed the plot twists and suspense. The story is intended as the first in a series, with multiple reviewers expressing anticipation for future installments. The book’s age rating is suggested as 12+, with minimal violence and mild language, and it addresses themes such as the death of a parent and cancer off-page. The narrative is told in third person, past tense, and features a mix of adult and teen perspectives as they navigate personal and societal challenges in a technologically advanced future.

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